Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Personal Response

Without a doubt, after reading the modules and following the class exercises, I have so much more confidence that my introductions bring the readers in and clearly describes what the essay will be about. I am also a lot more confident in my body paragraphs. Following the DSS and PIE, my body paragraphs not only prove my point, but also in a manner with back up facts. Every writing assignment, I am become more efficient with my writing as I only include the important sentences.

I also learned a lot about advertisement. While I initially thought Hennessy's advertisement was just showing various pictures with handsome models, there are actually underlying messages in all pictures. Advertisements approach the work in a meticulous and insidious manner to attract more consumers without the consumers even realizing it.

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