I definitely learned a lot from this essay not only about myself as a writer but also about the content that I studied. After researching street racing, I didnt know how bit of a cult it is. People really dedicate their lives to be the fastest driver in town. Street racing can also be life threatening as well not only in terms of people dying from crashes, but people steal and take other people's cars. Street racing is very dangerous but I guess that is why people like it so much.
As a writer, I feel that this essay was a lot different than the last one. I say this because I feel this essay was more factual based than creative, kind of like a newspaper. I feel my intro was strong and I had pretty good topic sentences followed with good evidence to support my topic and thesis. Overall, I feel like i did a pretty good job.
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